with the increasing use of mobile phones, less people tend to write letters. some people believe that writing letters will disappear completely. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

这个题目当中writing letters出现的频率较高，且都在主句中出现，说明它就是我们要找的，如果你过多描述mobile phones给我们带来的好处就跑题了。另外，题目的写作任务也很清楚：do you agree that writing letters will disappear completely? 属于“支持或反对”类的题，必须明确表达你的立场，不能既同意又不同意，同时表达你同意或不同意的理由。

立场要做到鲜明并得到有效阐释需要有如下几个内容：topic sentence(句)，main ideas(论点)，supporting points(论据)。句通常放在文章的首段，开门见山地表明你的立场，句只能有一个。论点放在中间段的首句，让读者一目了然，论点应该有两个以上，否则论证就不充分;论据包括evidence(证据)、examples(例子)等，放在论点后面，每个论点都应该有论据作支撑，否则就会显得论据不足。

合理的文章结构通常由三大部分组成，即引言(introduction)、主体(body)和结论(conclusion)，写4-5段比较合理。introduction部分要涵盖、写作任务和句，主体则要包括足够的论点和论据，结论可以重申观点、提出建议或展望未来。在这里需要提醒大家一定要认真审题，许多考生在考试的时候没有看清题目要求，明明题目分析优缺点，有些同学却写成了同意与否的题目，整篇文章走题，如果走题，只能取得5分以下的分数。

2. 连贯与衔接

文章的连贯性主要体现在段落与段落之间，句子与句子之间。

段落之间的“启”、“承”、“转”、“合”可通过表顺序的过渡词完成，譬如：

表示开始：first of all, in the first place, at the very beginning, to begin with, currently, at present, for one thing等。

表示承接：besides, further more, in addition, moreover, what’s more, meanwhile, apart from, as well as, similarly, in the same way等。

表示转折：however, whereas, while, on the contrary, in contrast, on the other hand等。

表示结论：in conclusion, in brief, in short, to sum up, ultimately, overall等。

句子之间的逻辑关系也要通过一些逻辑连词来完成，譬如：

表示原因：because (of ), accordingly, due to, owing to, for this reason, since, as a result, as a consequence等。

表达观点：in my opinion, personally, from my viewpoint, it seems to me, it is clear to me that, as far as i am concerned

举例说明：for example, for instance, as follows, such as, that is to say, namely, just as, in particular等。

表示让步：although, in spite of, despite of, despite the fact that, regardless of等。

建议大家可以在平日的练习中多多使用这些连词造句，不能只认识而不会使用，例如in spite of 和 despite这两个词后面只能跟短语而不能跟句子，这都是同学们在作文中常常犯的错误。

3. 词汇资源lexical resource

词汇的多少并不能决定文章的好坏，但用词的精准性是可以加分的。一般来说词汇的准确表达可以通过两个方面达到，一是在用词的难度上拔高，二是在近义词的多种表达上提升。譬如要描述一个好人，很多同学首先想到的形容词就是good, kind, wise, nice, clever, great, bright等词，而这些词往往很难出彩，因为描述太过于抽象，如果能用到诸如ambitious, tactful, eloquent, charismatic, committed之类的词就很具体了。

当然，这些词需要我们平时的日积月累，不是靠一两天的功夫就可以运用自如的。还有，值得提醒的是不要认为这些词好就过分堆积，会给考官留下华而不实的感觉，

雅思写作取得高分的关键在于灵活地运用词汇，多使用非常用词汇。因此，在日常学习中，如何区别低分词汇和高分词汇是关键所在。中国考生一般来说可以比较正确的表达出自己的观点，但是对于词汇和句式的使用就有些茫然了，经常会重复使用词汇，句式也只会用简单句。

举一个例子，英语中的‘我认为’有无数种说法，大多数中国考生只会用‘i think’ ，学术写作中的 ‘我认为’不能使用这个词组，i contend, from my point of view, as far as i am concerned, i argue, i assert…这些词汇都是学术英语中表示个人观点的高分词汇。

4. 语法的多样性和准确性 grammatical range and accuracy

句子的好坏主要取决于句子结构的准确性和丰富性，句子的长度和复杂性以及用语的.逻辑性和正式性。

句子结构的准确性涉及主谓一致、句子平衡性等问题，比如：the main reason for this use of informal languages are various and complicated. 这个句子不细心的同学很难发现它有问题，因为主语太长有时会忽视真正的主语其实是the main reason，是个单数形式，所以are 应该改为is. 再比如：in my opinion, use mobile phones to send messages is more convenient than write letters.

这是个很典型的错误，很多同学在写作的过程当中会误把动词或动词短语当主语用而造成句子结构的错误，而只有动词的非谓语形式才能在句中充当主语或宾语，因此，此句正确的表达应该是：in my opinion, using mobile phones to send messages is more convenient than writing letters.

句子结构的丰富性也是考官给分的一个亮点，好的段落应该由不同的句式组成，而不应该是千篇一律的句子结构。例如：i have many hobbies. for example, i like movies, i like playing basketball and football, and i like singing and dancing.

很明显，该句完全由“i + do”结构组成且like使用的频率过高，我们不妨做如下修改：i have many hobbies. movies, for example, are my favorite and i am also fond of playing basketball and football. sometimes when staying with my friends, i’d prefer singing and dancing rather than any other way of amusement.

句子的长度和难度是很多考生追求的目标，其实并不需要每个句子都写得很长很复杂，相反，如果整篇文章都是长难句，考官也会觉得很厌烦，就像一个人喜欢吃红烧肉，如果你天天给他吃红烧肉，他也会觉得很腻味一样，因此最好的方法就是长短句结合。

如何短句变长：即善用连接词and, but, or, yet, so等。例如：living off campus is exciting. living off campus is more independent. i prefer the convenience of living on campus. 不难看出，这是两种对立的观点，因此我们可以将其变为：living off campus is exciting and more independent, but i prefer the convenience of living on campus.

还有比较重要的一点是不容忽视的，即用语的正式性和严谨性。实际上，在汉语中也有很多这样的例子，比如我们说：“这里人真多啊!”这就是一个典型的口语化的表达方式，而如果用“人山人海”、“车水马龙”、“摩肩接踵”等词来形容人多就是写作语言了。

我们看几个非正式用语的句子：parents have to get kids food and other stuff. 此句中的kids和stuff就是两个非正式用语，如变成：parents have to provide children with food and other necessities.就正式了。

再如：people always say competitive sports are totally cool. 此句中的cool以及这个句式都是属于比较口语化的，应该变为：it is always said that competitive sports benefit us in several important ways.

1、雅思大作文写作需要注意写好文章框架

文章的framework即文章的结构永远是决定一篇写作是否达到要求的最重要的标准，寄一篇文章好不好，首先看的不是他的句型，词汇或者是论点等。而是段落之间的衔接一定要十分清楚，我们不能老师采用三大段的形式—开头，经过，结尾。我们可以多用用连接词，例如：first fo all,morever,secondly,lastly等，另外可以多分自然段，给考官一目了然的感觉。还有我们可以多看看国外的文章，看看他们的写作模式，这样写出来的雅思大作文才能更加贴近考官的标准。

2、雅思大作文写作技巧中，句型的多样化是非常重要的一个。

如果一篇文章，从头到尾，永远用的只有一种句型，纳闷这篇文章一定拿不到高分，我们可以适当的该换一下句型。

基本句型包括：1>主谓句2>there be 3>主表系结构的句子4>被动语态

复杂句型包括：1>并列句2>从句（定语，状语，名词性，非谓语）

3、词汇的variety是雅思大作文写作技巧中最基础的一个，也是最难掌握的一个。

说实话做到这点真的很难，首先你要有庞大的词汇量，第二你要用的恰当，不出错误。当然大家可以累计一些固定搭配的词汇，例如：激烈的竞争fierce competition等。

4、多举example雅思大作文写作技巧中的重要组成部分。

大家不要小看这一点，对于写作基础不是很好的考生来说，这点是最重要的。一篇文章如果让你从头到尾都是在讲道理，根本没有那么多话要说。而且有时候还不一定说的清楚。那么这时候那就用例子来表明你的观点。另外考官也是很欢迎考生在雅思大作文的写作中举例证明的，因为这样更具体。

雅思作文篇2

the most prominent memory of my trip to europe in 1983 was not the excitement of traveling abroad for the first time but the discomfort of flying in a smoke-filled airplane for almost six hours. even in the non-smoking section, i was coughing and choking during the entire flight. and whenever i had to use the restroom, i had to hold my nose as i passed through the smoking area to the lavatory.

if i ruled the world, i would certainly outlaw cigarette smoking in all public places. fortunately for smokers everywhere, i don't rule the world. nevertheless, i fully support the idea behind the new york state legislature's recent bill to ban smoking in all restaurants in new york state.

according to the new york times, officials in both houses of the legislature say the legislation is "very close to fruition." california is the only other state i know that has banned smoking in restaurants and bars, and despite the predictions of some restaurant owners, i haven't read any reports that restaurant attendance has fallen off significantly since the bill passed. why should it? food is a necessity. people need to eat.

assigning designated smoking and non smoking areas in restaurants is not enough. smoke travels quickly beyond the imaginary boundaries set up between tables and booths. as a patron, i should be able to enjoy my meal without choking on someone else's smoke. the same is true in bars and nightclubs, although i would exercise more legislative restraint in this setting because dancing and drinking are not as essential as eating. still, why should i have to endanger my lungs just to go dancing?

i would ban smoking on public sidewalks and streets as well. what you do in the privacy of your own home is your business, but once you pollute the rest of the world with cancer-inducing toxic fumes, it becomes the government's business. i'm tired of asking people to put out their cigarettes or asking waiters to patrol the boundaries of their restaurant's smoking section. so if this new bill becomes law, as i hope it does, non-smokers will finally be able to enjoy their restaurant meals without having to police the artificial lines of separation that divide the two sections in restaurants.

雅思作文篇3

task：some people argue that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds.to what extent do you agree or disagree?

sample answer：

in recent years, animal protection has become an issue of concern. people take different attitudes towards the increasing attention and expenditure on wildlife conservation. some people suggest that the spending should be redirected to helping other fields in society. i agree with the view that the investment in wildlife protection is not worthwhile.

animals, as a key component of the whole food chain, have a profound impact on the sustainability of an ecosystem. as we known, every kind of animals plays an important role in natural balance. for instance, the demise of any species will lead to the growth or decline of other species. in some extreme cases, some species may at the verge of extinction such as dodo bird. if people did not take actions to protect wildlife as soon as possible, we humans would be affected in the end.

however, there are more issues that we need to focus in our society rather than protecting animals. in current social context, the primary task is still to improve living standards since there are many people living under the poverty line. only when people are in a good living condition, can they pay attention to other social problems. besides, technology and education are another two aspects of governments to concern. these two industries accelerate the development of society, which will provide a better protection for wildlife in turn.

in conclusion, although the animal is a significant part of ecosystem, it is better for governments to invest more finance and resources in other social problems.

雅思作文篇4

electricity is something that every primary school student touches every day. it's something we can't live without, but it's amazing. so when you use electricity, you have to start from saving.

in our country, power generation relies mainly on coal, and coal on earth is limited. at current consumption rates, global coal will be consumed in 250 years. after that, we will leave no coal for our children.

saving power is saving coal and contributing directly to reducing air pollution. because the acid rain is caused by burning coal, it can corrode the building strongly and acidify the soil and water, resulting in reduced grain production and the death of the plant and shrimp. according to the calculation, the economic loss caused by acid rain in south china is 140,000,000 yuan per year.

saving electricity can slow the warming of the earth. due to large amounts of coal combustion emissions of carbon dioxide, as a cover to block the heat of the ground outside sends out to the sky, and the greenhouse effect, if the earth's temperature rise, will cause drought or flood, will cause the melting ice. if all the icebergs on earth melt, countries and islands at lower altitudes will disappear.

we, who live today, are bound to enter the next century, and many of them are vulnerable to global warming. a total of 135,000 children in germany's 192 schools vowed to reduce the greenhouse effect of greenhouse gases by 10 percent in the communities they live in. they changed into energy-saving lamps, refused to use air conditioning, abandoned cars, and chose bicycles. after seven months of hard work, they have achieved their goal.

twinkling of an eye, we have run into beautiful june again, it's tree planting and afforestation opportunity of the country, in order to create a good green home, protect the ecological environment, i suggest the students:

love nature, love flowers and trees, protect and cherish animals, and carry out tree-planting and green activities.

we will actively promote environmental protection and bring environmental awareness to our families.

雅思作文篇5

in recent days, the spring flowers blossomed, and my mother and i often went out to play. in the park, looking at the beauty, the in the mind very happy, but to look on the ground, the ground rubbish piece, can see people eat food bag under the tree, milk boxes, bottles... in the bin bags, milk box outside a lot of dirty things, from time to time step on the road to not drink milk, sometimes stepped on eat bubble gum... there is a lot of leftover trash in the street where you sell snacks, disposable plastic bags, disposable chopsticks, soup, etc. the air could smell a lot of foul odour, and the environment was miasma.

rubbish is not only dirty, but also harmful to the human body. it is home to flies, mice and harmful bacteria. garbage can be a hassle, and if it's buried in the soil for hundreds of years, it can't be broken down, it stinks, and it pollutes the air.

i suggest you do the following: 1. don't spit everywhere. go out for dinner and bring your own chopsticks. because disposable chopsticks are made from wood. buy vegetables in your own bag.

let's protect our mother earth!

最近几天，春暖花开，我和妈妈经常出去玩。在公园里，看着美景，心里很开心，可是往地上一看，地上垃圾成片，在树下面可以看到人们吃过的食品袋、牛奶盒、饮料瓶……在垃圾箱外面有塑料袋、牛奶盒很多脏东西，在马路上时不时会踩到没喝完的牛奶，有时还会踩到吃过的泡泡糖……在路边卖小吃的地方有许多吃剩的垃圾，一次性塑料袋、一次性筷子、汤水等,苍蝇在上面乱飞……空气中能闻到许多恶臭味,好好的环境被弄得乌烟瘴气。

垃圾不仅脏，而且对人体有害。它是苍蝇、老鼠和有害细菌的大家园。垃圾处理起来比较麻烦，要是埋在土里几百年也不能分解掉，烧了的话气味难闻，还污染了空气。

我建议大家做好以下几点：1.不要随地吐痰。2.出去吃饭要自己带筷子。因为一次性筷子是用木头做的。3.买菜在自己带布袋子。

让我们一起保护我们的地球妈妈吧!

雅思作文篇6

on the losing of traditional culture

论传统文化的失落

it’s widely noted that lots of traditional cultures are disappearing along with the development of technology. many ancient architectures and traditional ways of living have been deserted. it seems that the traditional culture and craftsmanship will be replaced in this modern era.

随着科技的发展，许多传统文化正在消失。许多古老的建筑和传统的生活方式被遗弃了。在这个现代时代，传统的文化和工艺似乎将被取代。

the following reasons can account for the above phenomenon. firstly, traditional technologies are always considered ineffective while the new sciences are always highly efficient, because modern science and technology facilitate both our daily and academic life a lot, with which we can save much money and time. secondly, it is costly to protect the traditional culture, especially the maintenance and repair of the historical buildings.

以下原因可以解释上述现象。首先，传统技术总是被认为是无效的，而新的科学总是高效的，因为现代科学技术为我们的日常生活和学术生活提供了很多便利，我们可以节省很多金钱和时间。第二，保护传统文化，特别是历史建筑的维护和维修费用高昂。

in my opinion, although traditional culture is an ancient heritage, it couldn’t keep pace with the development of society. it is the tide of history that the traditional culture and technology will no doubt be eliminated in the end.

在我看来，虽然传统文化是一种古老的遗产，但它跟不上社会的发展。传统文化和技术最终无疑将被淘汰，这是历史的潮流。

雅思作文篇7

大家好，我是川大的大三学生，6月11日在成都考的雅思，最后成绩：总分7，听力7，阅读7，写作7，口语6，很高兴，10天，7分。一点都不牛，但对我来说已经相当不错了，我很满意啦：）

我总共计划了15天的全面复习，但中间有几天因为这样那样的事情而耽搁掉了，所以真正复习的时间只有10天。而在此之前我对雅思之知甚少，也完全没有心理准备说有一天会考雅思，但因为法国签证必须需要雅思成绩（我大四被交换去法国），没办法，逼上梁山了。

而在考雅思之前，我不得不承认我的英语水平很一般，甚至可以说比较差，四级第一次59，接下来一气之下就把四六级一起考了，四级75。5，六级69。考过一次bec中级，失败掉，只有d。不过在考雅思之前准备过一段时间toefl，水平有所提高。所以这次的雅思成绩对我来说已经相当满意了。

而在准备的阶段，我在3g下到了很多有用的资料，特别是听力机经，写作范文，口语机经等，对这次考试帮助相当大，所以我在拿到成绩后就想到来这里把自己的备考过程给大家分享一下，希望有那么一点点用处

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先分为三项说吧：

听力：

这是我最头疼的地方，我bec的成绩里听力是weak：（而我在复习计划的前几天是听真题，做点分析，但做下来的效果很差，基本都是错20到15个，虽然天天在空闲的时候都挂着个mp3听真题和bbc，但真的进展很小。听力这玩意，确实不是一天两天的事情，是长时间积累的结果。所以在最后8天，我改变了策略，我在这里下了听力机经，发现其实版本并不多（没我想像的多，我想起码100来个version），而且每个section的很少有重复的，这就为牢固的记忆提供了保障，雅思英语《很高兴，10天，7分》。所以我用了7天，每天4个小时来背机经，然后最后一天把全部看了一遍，然后运气特别好，在考试的.时候正好遇到两个section（考的时候我都快笑出来了），而且另外两个部分我都听的不错，虽然最后一篇很有几个没听清楚。

建议：短期复习的朋友，在最后一段时间去背机经是很有用处的，因为听力这东西一定要经过长时间的锻炼（虽然背机经是一个很痛苦的过程），既然没有足够的时间，那就背机经当抱佛脚吧。

阅读：

阅读一直是我的强项，中国学生一般都是阅读很强哈，呵呵。在开始复习的前几天，我做了三套真题，分别错了9个，4个，3个，然后我就停下不做了，我想做真题主要是适应雅思考试的方式。接下来的日子，有空的话我就做做《雅思阅读真经》，但总共做了不到10篇。在最后一天做了一套真题，错了6个。考试的时候感觉还不错，但结果不是很理想，没有达到7。5的目标。

建议：1，即使是短期复习，也要尽力去适应雅思的方式，因为雅思很多是细节的题，所以要注意阅读的技巧（关于技巧，其他牛人已经说了很多了）

2，在最后复习阶段，一定要尽全力提高阅读速度（我也知道这不是说提高就提高的，但有这样的意识再加上一些对自己有帮助的方法，还是会有效果的）。我有个建议，大家在阅读的时候不要在心里默读，尽量做到一看到这个单词就反应过来它的意思，然后马上跳过；可以在复习的时候，每次做阅读的时候都这样训练。

写作：

写作我也一直不差，因为以前背过新概念的一些文章。雅思的作文其实想要提高也不是难事，我买了一本《雅思万能八分作文》，还不错，里面有很多句子值得借鉴；然后我看了一些从3g上下载的范文，又从里面挑了一些句子和表达；在最后一天的时候，把我挑的句子和表达都罗列在一起，大概也就50条左右，我背了一下，接着就计时练了一次，结果在规定时间内直接写超了，task1写了200多，task2写了350，当时把我吓了一跳，因为我怕考试的时候按这样的思路写这么多时间会不够。所以在考试的时候，我写的比较慢，控制好节奏，每句话都是想好了再下笔的，最后字数差不多。

建议：1，一定要看一定数目的

雅思作文篇8

with the development of science and technology, people's living standards are getting higher and higher, environmental problems are more and more serious, you found it?

let's talk about water pollution! gas stations and other factories always put the water without purification to the river, resulting in small fish without home. 50% of our country can not use clean water, this figure is not terrible? so saving water is imminent, you still waste it?

let's talk about the problem of reducing trees! now a lot of trees have been cut down by us, so the dust storm came, the flood came, nature to revenge us. we all know that the use of disposable chopsticks are made of trees, if each of us every day can use a pair of disposable chopsticks, one year down can keep ten thousand trees, see this time, you are still presumptuous behavior?

let's take a look at the sky, the blue sky is gone, the white clouds are hidden, is it really gone? no, they are just "smoke" by the smoke from the factory.

these are water caused by it? are our own human beings, if not felling of trees, garbage, a reasonable discharge of purified sewage, i believe our planet will be beautiful. protect everyone from the earth, let us work together to protect the environment!

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